World never seem so calm for her,
Numb eyes as heavy as a brick, those she could'nt open.
Lungs cuffed as to not be able to breathe,
Her svelte figure tightly packed past warmth to heat,
Her insatiable desires, fading unexpressed,
She tried hard, to realise it was not just a dream,
Her limbs locked static at their places,
Her soul parting apart from her helpless relic,
She tried to scream, but energy burst within never reached out,
Unable to elude the reckless fate,
Perplexed she sank giving in...
She sank deeper....deeper....and more deeper..........
Days past, folks talked "She was burried alive".
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13 lightenings:
death can be cruel and devasting!! my god the last moments!!cya around
Thanks Harry!! After many days.....I won't miss the chance to say you 'HI'!!!
Gosh! that was shocking !! but well written :)
Hey thanks for that!!
Awesome writeup there! Could draw the picture in mind while reading your words, really graphic and very good imagination.
@deadman
Dats so sweet of you. Thanks. Keep reading....
@deadman
Dats so sweet of you. Thanks. Keep reading....
wonderful blog...n the story was chilling..the suspense you built up was very commendable indeed...keep writing :)
i just love this pic.............its awesome!!!!!
@Umesh Agarwal
Oh thank u! That was a good pat;)
@Aruna the big chef ;)
Thanks for the visit.
Pic to symbolise her dying hehe...
A google pic.
My goodness!!gud one yaar!!;)
Whoa!! thanks for visiting dude!!
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