He gazed at its' slowing pulse,
Losing its life like a handicapped elf,
He could do nothing but lose himself with it,
Or to stride past its end forever,
which he could never,
Unseperable, he breathed his last with its';
last puff of his Cigar.
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12 lightenings:
Hmm, dream ending for a smoker :D Short one but sweet.
aaah..superb!!
I was fooled till the last line
:D
@deadman Inc
Yeah, I wanted this to haunt all smokers who read it. Dats da plan :)
@ praveen
Thank you.... That was my aim.
Mission accomplished. Just kidding...
well written !! liked it :)
very nicely said...
@Shradha
Thanks for the visit. Do keep in touch
hey J, this was good...
a scare fare for a smoker!! :D
do update ur blogroll, i've shifted my blog to wordpress at
Conjuring Kreativity
smokey.. :)
@ vinay.
Yup I'll do that. I rmbr u teln me abt da hacker the otherday.
@Chriz
Yeah! Thanks for visiting. Keep in touch.
hey..
nice..
only at last line i was able to knw whts going on.. :D
Oh that was my intention :D
Thanks for the visit!
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